Spring had its moment of sunshine and mirth;
We witnessed the wonder of nature’s rebirth.
Summer was splendid, we laughed and we danced
In squares and on beaches from Finland to France.
For glorious Autumn did nature explode
In radiant colours: scarlet and gold.
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Now the leaves have all fallen, the skies turned to gray,
We can hardly remember a bright summer’s day.
Spirits are drooping as nature grows stark,
Nighttime comes early, and morning is dark.
But be not despondent and winter will bring
Christmas and snowflakes, skating, and spring.
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Julia’s 100 word challenge: “…and winter will bring…” Still in the vein of Mother Goose-ishness, I went for a little rhyme.
Jake’s Sunday Challenge: City.
Very lovely! I did a poem too but I think yours is much more delightful and light. 🙂 Well done!
Thanks. I think you went in more for “real poetry”, which is much harder than nonsense verse.
Oh, I like yours. We had slightly similar ideas to start — poetry, the seasons — yet yours is as Lorraine said above. Delightfully light!
Thanks. I’m glad you like it. I wanted something cheery agains the days drawing in.
That was lovely – so light and frothy.
Thanks. Exactly what I wanted, to dispel the seasonal gloom.
A lovely poem with a positive spin.
I love the snow, and the bright days, but the dark really depresses me, so I worked against that…
Wonderful subjec. perfect rhyme and absolutely flawless rhythm. Well done
I do feel rhythm is important for the feel of a poem. Thanks for noticing :-).
That was brave – and you pulled it off with aplomb. Bring on Christmas!
Thanks. I didn’t go for the heavy stuff, so it’s not frightening. You can’t really go far wrong with Mother Goose :-).
I love this positive and poetic view of the changing seasons. Thank you for an uplifting entry.
Thank-you for saying so. This round seems to have put a lot of us in a poetic vein.
Like the linkage of the seasons and the use of rhyme, as others have said, delightful!
Thanks, that’s very kind of you.
Beautiful! Thank you for stopping by my blog. Not sure why blogger is playing with my font, but I got it fixed. Thanks for letting me know.
Yes, the font on the story is much better to read now, though it seems to be different for each post.
For some reason when I click on your user, it links to debraannelliott.blogspot rather than debragrayelliott, so I only found back via your gravatar. WordPress and blogger don’t really “go” together. I’m afraid.
Love the flow and rhythm of this poem. Beautifully done.
Thanks, I’m rather a fan of rhythm.
I love this! It put a smile on my face – nice flow, well done!
I’m glad. We all need something cheery now the days are drawing in.
A wonderfully cheerful poem! That bounciness is just what we need to help us through winter 🙂
Thanks. A lot of us seem to have been in the poetic vein this week.
Lovely, a real poem as opposed to the ramble I created. Your photo is stunning as well 🙂
I really think of it more as verse, not proper poetry. Thanks for the compliment. 🙂
I really like the rhyming scheme you built here, it’s asking for some musical accompaniment I think.
Excellent work!
I tried to change it to the more classic ababcc, but that proved too difficult in the first verse, so I left it. So I’m glad you like it.
Yes, it might be good with music, but I haven’t written music since high school, and maybe that’s just as well 😉